Drafts: Development of my Full Magazine

Here shows my previous full magazine. I have chosen a year later to develop my first ideas and i have now published my finished products below. As you can see my contents page which i rejected as my final piece. I consider my contents page to be lacking appealing images for my target audience, being high class fashion enthusiasts. i believe that the title of my magazine, isn't considered as a brand because it looks like 'prasm' rather than prism. To adapt this i am going to send my title of the magazine behind my model. I can afford to do this as my magazine is well known; similarly done by Vogue and Company magazine. In addition there will be on confusion for my readers.My double page spread was rejected because of the lack of colour, Grey scale images create elegance and sophistication however my whole spread is grey scaled which is too much. I also havent used photoshop text wrap and drop cap. In addition my images are very low quality and stretched, this cannot happen as my image is priced very high for my high class audience.